SonoooooooooF!!!!!!! God... You just... you!
THERE IS NO SUCH THING AS WRITING TOO MUCH
I'm sorry I had to use caps lock there. But I kid, Sonof, your post fit very well there. And don't be shy to write too much
As for Wulf and Ondur, I noticed there was some godmod going on in there, a lot.... of godmod....
I noticed a lot of people in these forums don't know about godmod too much, it's when you decide the effects and actions of another person's character. Like how Engulf you just made Wulf get sure to be stabbed then slammed onto the wall, you never gave Wulf time to react to the attack.
Same thing for Wulf, you made sure you bit Ondur, Cornelius, kick the elf in the head, all in a split second. Who told you Ondur didn't suddenly explode into light as you were hitting him, blinding everyone(giving a silly example here). You don't need to change what you wrote, keep them. But for the future, try to not godmod as much. Take baby steps, and slowly you'll get the hand of it. We'll help you along the way. No hard feelings, only constructing criticism.
And Rhyonir better watch his back because the second Cornelius finds him, he gonna ninja on him and chop his head off for being a coward

(I kid)