Valkyrie read some of his posts in other threads and showed me. I noticed that he posts a lot more, detail wise, than he does here. I'm not picking on you Caravan, I promise, but I think you should step it up a little. I know you can do better than what you're giving out. Granted though, with the situation (on top of a shadowy roof) it doesn't give much to describe scenery wise but there could be noises of the town folk and, of course, there are the other characters to describe.
I just really feel that if we added detail, and I know I've been harping on this the last two days but bear with me, it would fix the posting out of turn problem because it would take longer to post, plus it would make a better read. I want to be there you know? Otherwise, what's the point?